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Does the weather affect your mood? Please explain.

이진태/2024-04-05

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
The weather obviously affect people's mood and atmosphere of life . I don't know why, however, we all know this. These days in Korea, the cherry blossom is blooming, so many Koreans feel happy mood.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Het JT! I've heard about those cherry blossoms as well and how they are improving a lot of people's moods these days.
~~Teacher Ryka^^


The weather obviously affect people's mood and atmosphere of life .
>>The weather obviously affects people's mood and the atmosphere of life.

I don't know why, however, we all know this.
>>I don't know why, but we all know this.

These days in Korea, the cherry blossom is blooming, so many Koreans feel happy mood.
>>These days in Korea, the cherry blossoms are blooming, so many Koreans are in a happy mood.
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