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What kind of feelings do you usually feel every day? Write about why you feel them.

차유진/2024-04-04

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I usually feel happy every day. Because I can play with my friends, watch TV, play games. So I'm happy child ^^
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi there, Yale!

Please find the corrected composition from Wednesday's homework. Also, don't forget to read the corrections provided.  Speak to you tomorrow!  


Cheers,
Jean~~




                            What kind of feelings do you usually feel every day? Write about why you feel them.



I usually feel happy every day.
Because I can play with my friends, watch TV, play games.
>> I usually feel happy every day because I can play with my friends, watch TV, and play games.

So I'm happy child ^^
>> So I'm a happy child. 


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