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How are you different from your best friend? Describe your differences in terms of personality

차진혁/2024-04-04

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My best friend likes sports because he is very active. But I don't like sports, l like reading books than sports. My best friend likes black and l like vivid colors.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Here's your edited homework, Jimmy! 

Please take a look at the alternative sentences and correction written. See you this Friday! 


Cheers,
Jean~~




               How are you different from your best friend? Describe your differences in terms of personality?



My best friend likes sports because he is very active.
>> OR: My best buddy loves sports because he's very lively and energetic. 

But I don't like sports, l like reading books than sports.
>> But I don't like sports, I like reading books more than playing sports. 

My best friend likes black and l like vivid colors.
>> OR: My best friend prefers black color, but I like something more colorful. 

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