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Discuss a place you would like to visit in the future.

이진태/2024-04-04

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I wanna go to the amusement park in a Japan. I heard the Mario amusement park is newly opened. I like Mario since I was younger, so I want to go to the this place someday.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi JT! I hope you get to visit the amusement park in Japan soon. Thank you for sharing this.

~~Teacher Ryka^^

I wanna go to the amusement park in a Japan.

>> I want to go to an amusement park in Japan.

I heard the Mario amusement park is newly opened.

>> I heard that the Mario amusement park has recently opened.

I like Mario since I was younger, so I want to go to the this place someday.

>> I have liked Mario since I was younger, so I want to visit this place someday.