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Compare traveling alone with traveling with friends or family. Which do you enjoy more and why?

이진태/2024-04-04

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I had an experience traveling alone. Many people think traveling alone is romantic, however it's not. It's little bit boring and it looks like pity. I think traveling with someone is better.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi JT! Thank you for sharing your experience about traveling alone. Keep it up!
~~Teacher Ryka^^


I had an experience traveling alone.
>> I had an experience of traveling alone.

Many people think traveling alone is romantic, however it's not.
>>Many people think traveling alone is romantic; however, it's not.

It's little bit boring and it looks like pity.
>> It's a little bit boring and can feel lonely.

I think traveling with someone is better.
>>  I think traveling with someone is better.
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