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What do you think is the biggest change in how families are in your country?

박성진/2024-04-04

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
In Korea, nuclear family is increasing. As agricultural system is lower, relatives don't need to live together. And as companys are in verious cities, relatives are live in each city.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Harry! Thank you so much for answering your homework. Keep up the good work and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia 
In Korea, nuclear family is increasing.
>> Correct
As agricultural system is lower, relatives don't need to live together.
>> As the agricultural system is less prevalent, relatives don't need to live together.
And as companys are in verious cities, relatives are live in each city.
>> And since companies are located in various cities, relatives live in different cities.
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