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유효린/2024-04-03

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I exercise or dance when I can't sleep Then I can sleep well because I am tired

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Hi, Lainey! Thank you so much for taking your time to do your homework. I appreciate it so much. Keep up the good work and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia

I exercise or dance when I can't sleep. Then I can sleep well because I am tired.

>> I exercise or dance when I can't sleep, and then I can sleep well because I am tired.