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박시연/2024-04-03

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Hello, T. Sharon! This is my homework. I usually watch my phone in 30 minutes before I go to bed. So it interrupts my sleep. But watching phone is very funny. Thus, I can't stop watching my phone before I sleep. Bye Bye!!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Irene!
Thank you for keeping an open mind about writing.
You understood the question perfectly.
Good job!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon

I usually watch my phone in 30 minutes before I go to bed.

>> I usually look at my phone for 30 minutes before I go to bed.

So it interrupts my sleep.

>> It actually keeps me from sleeping.

But watching phone is very funny.

>> I do enjoy looking at my phone.

Thus, I can't stop watching my phone before I sleep.

>> I really can't stop looking at my phone before I go to sleep.