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How do you take care of your health?

차진혁/2024-04-02

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
My health-care methods are as follows. 1. I always practice Taekwondo in academy. 2. I eat food evenly. 3. I try eat less unhealthy food.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi there, Jimmy!

You can find below the edited composition from yesterday's homework. Please pay attention to the corrections given. 
Speak to you tomorrow!  


Cheers,
Jean~~



                                How do you take care of your health?



My health-care methods are as follows.
>> My health-care methods are as follows:

1. I always practice Taekwondo in academy.
>> I always practice Taekwondo in the Taekwondo center. 

2. I eat food evenly.
>> I have a balanced diet. 

3. I try eat less unhealthy food.
>> I try to eat less unhealthy food. 

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