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Do you like drawing as a hobby? Explain your answer.

차유진/2024-04-02

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Yes I do. I like drawing as a hobby. When I draw I feel happy. Specifically I feel happy when I complete a difficult picture.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello there, Yale!

Here's your corrected homework from yesterday. Please check out the corrected and alternative sentences below. 
See you tomorrow!  


Cheers,
Jean~~




                                   Do you like drawing as a hobby? Explain your answer.


Yes I do. I like drawing as a hobby.
>> or: Sure, I enjoy drawing as a hobby. 

When I draw I feel happy.
>> or: I feel happy when I draw. 

Specifically I feel happy when I complete a difficult picture.
>> To be specific, I feel happy when I complete a difficult picture. 

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