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When I was young, I have lost my bag during school trip. I had found that at Information desk, but there wasn't money in my bag. So I was upset.

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Hi, Harry! Thank you so much for answering your homework. Keep up the good work and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia

When I was young, I have lost my bag during school trip.

>> When I was young, I lost my bag during a school trip.

I had found that at Information desk, but there wasn't money in my bag.

>> I had found it at the Information desk, but there wasn't any money in my bag.

So I was upset.

>> Correct