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윤영선/2024-04-02

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First of all, I think restaurants should taste better than what they look like and what the atmosphere is like. There is a regular restaurant in my neighborhood that I often go to. It is one of my favorite restaurants.It's a pork belly restaurant. I like it because the meat and side dishes are delicious. It's a very small, old, humble shop, but it serves the best food. It's a healing food for me.

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I agree, Mia, that the taste of the food should be the restaurant's priority before thinking of aesthetics. Very good job!

-Khai

First of all, I think restaurants should taste better than what they look like and what the atmosphere is like.

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>> First of all, in my opinion, I think restaurants should taste better than what they look like and what the ambience is like.

There is a regular restaurant in my neighborhood that I often go to.

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>> There is an ordinary restaurant in my neighborhood that I usually go to.

It is one of my favorite restaurants.

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It's a pork belly restaurant.

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>> It is a restaurant that has pork belly as its specialty.

I like it because the meat and side dishes are delicious.

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>> I enjoy it because the meat and sides are delicious.

It's a very small, old, humble shop, but it serves the best food.

>> It's a very small, old, and humble shop, but it serves the best food.

It's a healing food for me.

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>> It is a comforting food for me.