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박수혜/2024-04-02

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

1. Usually I stretch as soon as I wake up for my health. 2. I watched again the movie for the class homework. 3. I should try to speaking English for better than now to working holiday in Australia. 4. I should try to avoid strong-tasting food for speed up my recovering. 5. He wrote birthday letter for her.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Su,

Good job for doing this homework. I really appreciate your hard work. ^^

-Teacher Ash

1. Usually I stretch as soon as I wake up for my health.

>> Usually, I stretch as soon as I wake up for my health.

OR >> I usually stretch as soon as I wake up to keep my body healthy.

2. I watched again the movie for the class homework.

>> I watch the movie again for my homework.

3. I should try to speaking English for better than now to working holiday in Australia.

>> I should strive to improve my English-speaking skills for my working holiday in Australia.

4. I should try to avoid strong-tasting food for speed up my recovering.

>> I should try to avoid strong-tasting food for a speedy recovery.

5. He wrote birthday letter for her.

>> He wrote a birthday letter for her.