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What do you think about taking a nap? How about sleeping in?

오서현/2024-04-02

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Some people like taking a nap. It’s good to efficiency to work. But I don’t like nap. because I can’t sleep well at the night. And sleeping in on weekends with nothing is good. But to sleeping in when i have promise friends or weekdays is worst.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you for this Seo Hyeon!

Some people like taking a nap.

>>> correct

It’s good to efficiency to work.

>>> It’s good for efficiency at work.

But I don’t like nap. because I can’t sleep well at the night.

>>> However, I don’t like napping because I can’t sleep well at night.

And sleeping in on weekends with nothing is good.

>>> And sleeping in on weekends with nothing planned or anything to do is good.

But to sleeping in when i have promise friends or weekdays is worst.

>>> But to sleeping in when I have appointments with friends or weekdays is terrible.