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What do you like best about your sibling?

박준현/2024-04-01

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I like games, P.E and board games. First, I like games very very very very. Second, P.E is my favorite school classes. Lastly, board games are I very very very very verylike board games, for example, I like chess very very very much. These are the my favorite things about my sibling.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Henry!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best!
~ T. Camille

I like games, P.E, and board games.

>> CORRECT!
First, I like games very very very very.

>> First, I like games very much.

Second, P.E is my favorite school classes.

>> Second, P.E is my favorite school class.

Lastly, board games are I very very very very verylike board games,

>> Lastly, I like board games very much.

for example, I like chess very very very much.

>> For example, I really like chess.

These are the my favorite things about my sibling.

>> These are my favorite things that I do with my sibling.