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What are some examples of healthy snacks that you enjoy?

김동아/2024-04-01

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hmm... Just one thing. I had ate greek yogart for healthy on sometime. I like spicy food.. I know, must have to eat healthy food. But so difficult everyday. T.T

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Hi, Ena!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best! :)
~ T. Camille

hmm... Just one thing.

>> Hmm, there's just one thing.

I had ate greek yogart for healthy on sometime.

>> I sometimes eat greek yogurt for my health.

I like spicy food.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I like eating spicy food.

I know, must have to eat healthy food.

>> I know, I must eat healthy food.

But so difficult everyday. T.T

>> But it's so difficult to do it everyday. T.T