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What fusion-food would you like to try?

신현섭/2024-02-22

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I'd like to try fusion-food a lot. You know, there are many kinds of fusion restaurants in Brisbane because Australia's food is rubbish as my teacher told me. Sometimes, I don't understand why she said it since England has an only Fish and Chips. It doesn't make sense. By the way, I want to try Colombia, and Taiwan fusion-food. Especially, Tom Yum Goong that I want to try the best is. And, crocodile meat. It's very famous with Chinese's food in Australia.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

I'd like to try fusion-food a lot.

>> CORRECT!

You know, there are many kinds of fusion restaurants in Brisbane because Australia's food is rubbish as my teacher told me.

>> CORRECT!

Sometimes, I don't understand why she said it since England has an only Fish and Chips.

>> Sometimes, I don't understand why she said it since England has only Fish and Chips.

It doesn't make sense.

>> CORRECT!

By the way, I want to try Colombia, and Taiwan fusion-food.

>> By the way, I want to try Colombian and Taiwanese fusion-food.

Especially, Tom Yum Goong that I want to try the best is.

>> Especially, Tom Yum Goong is the one that I want to try the best. [Tom Yum Goong is from Thailand. :D ~ T. Camille]

And, crocodile meat.

>> And, I would also like to try crocodile meat.

It's very famous with Chinese's food in Australia.

>> It's a very famous Chinese food in Australia.