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In Korea, are people in their 20's health conscious?
오서현/2024-02-22
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Answer is yes.
The most 20’s people in Korea They think health is necessary for their lives. So most people exercise.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Thank you for this Seo Hyeon!
Answer is yes.
>>> The answer is yes.
The most 20’s people in Korea They think health is necessary for their lives. So most people exercise.
The most 20’s people in Korea They think health is necessary for their lives. So most people exercise.
>>> Most people in their 20's in Korea think good health is necessary for their lives so most people exercise.
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