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introduction of yourself

작성자: 이*아
2025-02-20 337

회원님의 영작문

I’m Hyuna Lee and my English name is Isabelle.
When I sayed it, People asked me if I’m christian.
because ‘Isabelle’ sounds like a baptismal name.
but I’m not. I just liked it and decided to do it.

I'm 29 years old in Korea age.

I from south korea and I lived in ‘Asan’ my whole life.

I am currently working as a designer.
and my main job is developing patterns for tiles like wood or stone, texture design.
I’m satisfied with my current job.
but I’m also exploring other opportunities to work at a better company.
I aim to work for a company that will provide me with a stable finance and position.

My hobby is hiking.
There are a lot of mountains in my country, and I love going to them.
Being in the forest make me feel so peaceful and It’s also fun to go with friends, have a picnic, and chat together.
I usually go to a mountain near my house.
and I try to go whenever I have free time.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Isabelle!
Thank you for your hard work! ^^ Great job sharing about yourself! Just watch for word choices and sentence flow. Here are some refinements for clarity and natural phrasing.

"sayed" → "said" (past tense correction)
"People" → "people" (no capital letter needed)
"I from South Korea" → "I am from South Korea" (missing verb)
"in Korea age" → "in Korean age" (natural phrasing)
"developing patterns for tiles like wood or stone, texture design." → "developing tile patterns that resemble wood and stone." (more natural)
"Being in the forest make me feel" → "Being in the forest makes me feel" (subject-verb agreement)

Your content is great—these small tweaks will make it even smoother!

CONTENT:
I’m Hyuna Lee and my English name is Isabelle.
- CORRECT.
When I sayed it, People asked me if I’m christian.
because ‘Isabelle’ sounds like a baptismal name.
but I’m not. 
- When I said it, people asked me if I’m Christian
because ‘Isabelle’ sounds like a baptismal name,
but I’m not. 
I just liked it and decided to do it.
-  I just liked it and decided to use it.

I'm 29 years old in Korea age.
- I'm 29 years old in Korean age.

I from south korea and I lived in ‘Asan’ my whole life.
- I am from South Korea, and I have lived in ‘Asan’ my whole life.

I am currently working as a designer. and my main job is developing patterns for tiles like wood or stone, texture design.
- I am currently working as a designer,
and my main job is developing patterns for tiles like wood and stone textures.
I’m satisfied with my current job.
but I’m also exploring other opportunities to work at a better company.
- I’m satisfied with my current job,
but I’m also exploring other opportunities to work at a better company.
I aim to work for a company that will provide me with a stable finance and position.
- CORRECT.

My hobby is hiking.
- CORRECT.
There are a lot of mountains in my country, and I love going to them.
- CORRECT.
Being in the forest make me feel so peaceful and It’s also fun to go with friends, have a picnic, and chat together.
Being in the forest makes me feel so peaceful, and it’s also fun to go with friends, have a picnic, and chat together.
I usually go to a mountain near my house.
and I try to go whenever I have free time.
- I usually go to a mountain near my house, and I try to go whenever I have free time.
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