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How can being brave help you in life?

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I think being brave helps me challenge anything in life.

I had a big three challenges in my university¡¯s life.
First, I traveled to Japan with a friend last year. I made the trip¡¯s plan and prepared money on my own for traveling.
Second, I lived in China to study Chinese about 4months and it was first time I lived in abroad for a long time.
Third, I participated in a Chineses speaking contest and I prized third.

I had a lot of experience and broaden my perspective through these challenges. And now, I am not afraid of challenging anything and look forward to face next step. But if I was not being brave, I couldn¡¯t challenge nothing. So, I think that being brave helps me start new things and it is very important part of my life.

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Hello Yun Bin,

Wow, I¡¯m really impressed with all the challenges you¡¯ve taken on! It¡¯s amazing how you¡¯ve traveled to Japan, lived in China, and even participated in a speaking contest, all of these show incredible bravery and determination. It¡¯s clear that being brave has opened up many opportunities for you, and you've gained so much experience and confidence from it. Your ability to face new challenges head-on is really inspiring! Keep being brave, because it¡¯s clear that it will continue to lead you to great things in life.

~Teacher Cathy

 

I think being brave helps me challenge anything in life.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I believe being brave helps me take on any challenge in life.

I had a big three challenges in my university¡¯s life.

>>I had three big challenges during my university life.

First, I traveled to Japan with a friend last year.

>>CORRECT

OR>>First, I went to Japan with a friend last year.

I made the trip¡¯s plan and prepared money on my own for traveling.

>>I made plans for the trip and prepared money on my own for traveling.

Second, I lived in China to study Chinese about 4months and it was first time I lived in abroad for a long time.

>>Second, I lived in China to study Chinese for about four months, and it was the first time I lived abroad for a long time.

Third, I participated in a Chineses speaking contest and I prized third.

>>Third, I participated in a Chinese-speaking contest and won third place.

I had a lot of experience and broaden my perspective through these challenges.

>>I gained a lot of experience and broadened my perspective through these challenges.

And now, I am not afraid of challenging anything and look forward to face next step.

>>And now, I am not afraid of challenges and look forward to facing the next step.

But if I was not being brave, I couldn¡¯t challenge nothing.

>>But if I hadn't been brave, I wouldn't have been able to challenge anything.

So, I think that being brave helps me start new things and it is very important part of my life.

>>So, I think that being brave helps me start new things and it is a very important part of my life.

 

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