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Many recent college graduates are un- or underemployed. What do you think about this statement?

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I think it is true.
I heard that even some graduates from top university are not very easy to find a job, especially in Korea or China.
It is probably because of the economic condition one's country has, so the hiring rate could be very low.
Maybe at the same time, good and easy job opportunities were already fully taken by previous generation and the young people tend to find soft jobs only.

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Hey there, Ms. Anna! You make a valid point! The job market can be tough, especially in countries like Korea and China. Economic conditions definitely play a big role, and it¡¯s interesting to consider how previous generations have influenced the opportunities available to young people today.
~T. Jenna

I think it is true. I heard that even some graduates from top university are not very easy to find a job, especially in Korea or China.
>>I think it is true. I heard that even some graduates from top universities find it not very easy to find a job, especially in Korea or China.
OR
>>I believe this is indeed the case. I've heard that even graduates from prestigious universities find it arduous to land a job, particularly in Korea and China, where the competition is fierce and many are left chasing their tails.
It is probably because of the economic condition one's country has, so the hiring rate could be very low.
>>It is probably because of the economic conditions in one's country that the hiring rate could be very low.
OR
>>The low hiring rate can likely be attributed to the economic conditions prevailing in one's country.
Maybe at the same time, good and easy job opportunities were already fully taken by previous generation and the young people tend to find soft jobs only.
>>Maybe, at the same time, good and easy job opportunities were fully taken by the previous generation, leaving young people to pursue only soft jobs.
OR
>>Maybe, concurrently, the valuable and accessible job opportunities were entirely seized by the previous generation, forcing younger individuals to settle for less demanding positions.
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