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I think homeschooling has several advantages. First all the curriculums are for the student's aptitude and needs. And one on one teaching improves the student's school work. Moreover the students who study at home save time and money. And the students have more various activities than those who attend formal schools. However, homeschooling has some downsides. The students can't learn the importance of socializing and interaction with peers. And they can't learn a kind of order or rules of organization. On top of that, all classes are too dependent to the ability of parents or guidances who provide instructions.

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Good day, Miss Ki Yeon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
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I think homeschooling has several advantages. 
>> CORRECT! 
First all the curriculums are for the student's aptitude and needs. 
>> CORRECT! 
And one on one teaching improves the student's school work. 
>> CORRECT! 
Moreover the students who study at home save time and money. 
>> CORRECT! 
And the students have more various activities than those who attend formal schools. 
>> CORRECT! 
However, homeschooling has some downsides. 
>> CORRECT! 
The students can't learn the importance of socializing and interaction with peers. 
>> CORRECT! 
And they can't learn a kind of order or rules of organization.
>> CORRECT! 
On top of that, all classes are too dependent to the ability of parents or guidances who provide instructions.
>> On top of that, all classes are too dependent to the ability of parents or guardians who provide instructions.

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