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Why is art important?

작성자: 전*채
2022-07-29 465

회원님의 영작문

People think that art is not nessesery part of life. It might be seems an extravagant things for rich people.
But art is always close to you.
when I took a class in college, my major film professor said,
Art can make you know the current of the times.
In the movies history case, movie is completly leisure thing.
It's an extreme situation. You might be thing that during the wars, or the great depression of the economy, the movie might death. But it was not. That time, the movie industry was revival period. It is because, people wanted to escape from reality. People saw the movies a lot. many countries make big different movies trend when they were in wars or bad times.
Not only movie, drawing, music, write.. all arts also has been exist nearby our side always. So Art is very important to people. It's not difficult things it's a matter of course.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Eun Chae!
Art is beautiful and unique in many ways.  Thank you for answering this question.  Keep on answering your writing homework. ^^

~T. Maine

People think that art is not nessesery part of life.
>> People think that art is an unnecessary part of life. 
 It might be seems an extravagant things for rich people.
>> It might seem to be an extravagant thing for rich people. 
But art is always close to you.
>>Correct.
when I took a class in college, my major film professor said,
Art can make you know the current of the times.
>> When I took a class in college, my major film professor said that art can make you know the current times. 
In the movies history case, movie is completly leisure thing.
>> In the movie history's case, movie is completely a leisure thing. 
It's an extreme situation. 
>>Correct. 
You might be thing that during the wars, or the great depression of the economy, the movie might death. 
>> You might see happened during the wars or the great depression of the economy that leads to death. 
But it was not. 
>> Correct. 
That time, the movie industry was revival period. 
>> At that time, the movie industry was in a revival period. 
It is because, people wanted to escape from reality. 
>>It is because people wanted to escape from reality. 
People saw the movies a lot. 
>> People saw a lot of movies. 
many countries make big different movies trend when they were in wars or bad times.
>> Many countries make big different movie trends when they were in wars or bad times. 
Not only movie, drawing, music, write.. all arts also has been exist nearby our side always. 
>>It's not only in the movies, drawings, music, writing, etc.  But all kinds of art have always existed in our surroundings.
So Art is very important to people. 
>> So art is very important to people. 
It's not difficult things it's a matter of course.
>> It's not a difficult thing; it's a matter of course. 

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