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The worst news which I heard in Korea is baseball news. It was about my favorite player will leave my favorite team. I was realy sad when I heard the news because I am not able to watch my favorit player¡¯s play in my favorite baseball team since next year.

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Hi Alex:)

That sounds awful. :( I'm sorry to hear that. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

The worst news which I heard in Korea is baseball news. 
>> The worst news that I have heard is the one about baseball. 

It was about my favorite player will leave my favorite team. 
>> It is about my favorite player leaving my favorite team. 

I was realy sad when I heard the news because I am not able to watch my favorit player¡¯s play in my favorite baseball team since next year
>> I was really sad when I heard the news because I will not be able to watch my favorite player play starting next year. 

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