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작성자: 황*구
2022-02-09 521

회원님의 영작문

Hellow! Andrea. It is always fun and exciting. I know that you can't believe that though. I just listened the record file. I was surprised that I sound so tired. I don't like people who has low confidence and voice but now that is me!! I should try to be more energitic from next class so you will not be down either.

My parents adopted a dog! She's name is bead in Korean. She is 3 years old. Actually I' ve tried of having dogs when I was young. It was really hard. So now I think I can feed some fishes..I've also tried of them It's much easier than feeding dogs. I love fishes as much as zombies. When I go to an lake. I can stay there all day looking fishes swiming freely. They make me relax. So If I have to take only one I would choose fishes!

You said you had surgery.
I could fianally get it during record file..
I hope you get much better soon and you will be! I believe your power. I knew it. Actually last class you said you like cheese burger. It sounds somewhat sad.. just kidding :)

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Q!^^ 

I never really had a pet. 
I am scared with animals that have furs.
Dogs, cats, hamsters, and guinea pigs are examples of it. 
I don't want their fur to touch my skin. haha
However, my niece has a pet fish. When they transferred to another house, her fishes syated in our house. 
Now, I am the one looking after the fishes. 

Betta fish are cool. You should check them. 
Regarding my surgery, it happened last July. So I am okay now. 
It was actually my gallbladder. It has been removed. 

Teacher Andrea

Hellow! Andrea.
>> Hello, Andrea! 

It is always fun and exciting. 
>> I am a person who is always having fun and excited.  

I know that you can't believe that though. 
>> Correct 

I just listened the record file. I was surprised that I sound so tired. 
>> I just listened to the recorded file and I was surprised that I sounded tired. 

I don't like people who has low confidence and voice but now that is me!! 
>> I don't like people who have low self-confidence and soft voice, turns out that it is me!! 

I should try to be more energitic from next class so you will not be down either.
>> I should try to be more energetic starting on our next class so you will not be down either. 

My parents adopted a dog! 
>> Correct 

She's name is bead in Korean. 
>> Her Korean name is Bead. 

She is 3 years old.
>> Correct 

Actually I' ve tried of having dogs when I was young. 
>> Correct 

It was really hard. 
>> Correct 

So now I think I can feed some fishes..
>> So I thought I can feed some fish. 

I've also tried of them It's much easier than feeding dogs. 
>> I also tried having fish and it's much easier than having dogs. 

I love fishes as much as zombies. 
>> Correct (hahaha) 

When I go to an lake. I can stay there all day looking fishes swiming freely. 
>> When I go to a lake, I can stay there all day just by looking at fishes swimming freely. 

They make me relax. So If I have to take only one I would choose fishes!
>> They make me feel relaxed and if I could choose a pet, I would choose to have a fish. 

You said you had surgery.
>> Correct 

I could fianally get it during record file..
>>I was able to get it through the recorded file. 

I hope you get much better soon and you will be!
>> Correct 

I believe your power. 
>> Correct 
>> OR: I believe you are strong. 

I knew it. 
>> Correct 

Actually last class you said you like cheese burger. 
>> Correct 

It sounds somewhat sad.. just kidding :) .
>> Correct (hahahaha) 
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