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um.. in my case If i want to good relationship someone? contact is very important. like see often face, with activities and do anything. I think doing interest activity make good relationship. who is similar mind? mental? someone like me. The more physically activities more close and sometimes having a meal together It is good to know each other. How about you?
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Hello Jon !!!

We really need to put our best foot forward to achieve a goal in our life especially in learning English.

I know it will be a long process but if we don't give up....we can be happy and successful!!!!

Have a great day ahead!!!!

T. Jeny   


um.. in my case If i want to good relationship someone? 
>>In my case, if I want to have a good relationship with someone.
contact is very important.
>>Having a conversation is important.
like see often face, with activities and do anything.
>>I would often like to see the person, doing a lot of activities together.
I think doing interest activity make good relationship.
>>I like doing interesting things together makes a good relationship.
who is similar mind? mental? someone like me.
>>A person who thinks the same way as me.
The more physically activities more close and sometimes having a meal together
>>Doing physical activities would make us become closer like going out for a meal.
It is good to know each other.
>>correct
How about you?
>>correct
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