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Is it equitable for foreigners to purchase land in Korea, considering that Koreans are not permitted

이진태/2025-06-12

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In terms of equality, it is not equitalbe. However, In the real world, there are too many cases like this. The goverment would also have considered about investment. It is complex decision.
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In terms of equality, it is not equitalbe.
>> In terms of equality, it is not equitable.
OR >> From an equality standpoint, it is not equitable.

However, In the real world, there are too many cases like this.
>> However, in the real world, there are many cases like this.

The goverment would also have considered about investment.
>> The government likely considered the investment aspect as well.

It is complex decision.
>> It is a complex decision.
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