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김지숙/2025-06-10

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I wear clothes for a long time if I don't sweat a lot. I often wash my clothes to keep them clean. The best place to buy clothes is Moda Outlet. Put the clothes i don't wear anymore in the space where i don't use them.
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Eric, 

Thanks for doing your homework. Well done!

-Teacher Ash


I wear clothes for a long time if I don't sweat a lot.
>> If I don't sweat a lot, I wear my clothes for a long time.  

I often wash my clothes to keep them clean.
>> CORRECT!

The best place to buy clothes is Moda Outlet.
>>CORRECT!

Put the clothes i don't wear anymore in the space where i don't use them.
>> I keep the clothes in a container when I don't use them anymore. 
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