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The Amazon Rainforest
유수빈/2025-06-09
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
The Amazon Rainforest is the ecosystems with significant impact on global temperature.
However, this area is threatened by global warming.
To solve this problem, we have to save the energy and use eco-friendly products.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Kara!^^
However, this area is threatened by global warming.
To solve this problem, we have to save the energy and use eco-friendly products.
Thanks for doing some research about the Amazon Rainforest.
Hope you learned something from this homework. :)
Andrea
The Amazon Rainforest is the ecosystems with significant impact on global temperature.
>> The Amazon Rainforest is an ecosystem with a significant impact on global temperature.
However, this area is threatened by global warming.
>> Correct
To solve this problem, we have to save the energy and use eco-friendly products.
>> To solve this problem, we have to save energy and use eco-friendly products.
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