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No, I don't want to be firefighter.

유수빈/2025-06-06

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
No, I don't want to be firefighter. Because I'm scared of fire. However, I respect firefighter that always save people in the fire. Thanks to them, I'm living my life safely.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Kara! 

Being a firefighter is not easy.
It needs bravery and courage. 
Since I am weak, I cannot be a firefighter.

Andrea 

No, I don't want to be firefighter. Because I'm scared of fire.
>> No, I don't want to be a firefighter because I'm scared of fire.

However, I respect firefighter that always save people in the fire.
>> However, I respect a firefighter who saves people from fire. 

Thanks to them, I'm living my life safely.
>> Correct 
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