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My favorite local trip

양기연/2025-06-06

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I like the trip to Jeju Island most among local attractions. In the Island, I can climb and enjoy the highest mountain,Hanlasan. I always stay in the accommodation near the sea, enjoying the beautiful sea view and swimming at the beach. And I like seafood there. The fresh sushi in local market of Dong Moon is the best. In the Island, I can experience various walking trails, named Olle Gil.

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Hello, Gi Yean!

I can already imagine Jeju Island based on your answer. I have watched several dramas filmed there, and I can say that the view is really enticing. It must be so much fun to enjoy the food, scenery, and activities in that place. I really hope to visit one day!

- T. Caitlyn

I like the trip to Jeju Island most among local attractions.

>> I like trips to Jeju Island the most among local attractions.

In the Island, I can climb and enjoy the highest mountain,Hanlasan.

>> On the island, I can climb and enjoy the highest mountain, Hallasan.

I always stay in the accommodation near the sea, enjoying the beautiful sea view and swimming at the beach.

>> I always stay in accommodation near the sea, enjoying the beautiful view and swimming at the beach.

And I like seafood there.

>> CORRECT

The fresh sushi in local market of Dong Moon is the best.

>> The fresh sushi in the local market of Dongmun is the best.

In the Island, I can experience various walking trails, named Olle Gil.

>> On the island, I can experience various walking trails called Olle Gil.