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Do you know how good your eyesightis?

차진혁/2025-06-05

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
My eyesightis is left eyesight is 0.7~0.9 and right eyesight is 0.4~0.5 But use the glasses is every eyesight is 1.5
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please take a look at the corrections below. Have a good night there! 


Cheers,
Jean~~




                                          Do you know how good your eyesight is?


My eyesightis is left eyesight is 0.7~0.9 and right eyesight is 0.4~0.5
>>> My left eyesight is 0.7–0.9, and my right eyesight is 0.4–0.5.

But use the glasses is every eyesight is 1.5
>>> But with glasses, my eyesight in both eyes is 1.5.
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