The purpose of advertisements is to attract people to buy their products. Companies seeking profit use stimulating advertising techniques. However, they sometimes deceive customers about a product's performance, which causes several social problems. According to one newspaper, younger people are especially susceptible to incorrect information in the ads. Recently, sellers have been using social media that is not regulated by law. There are few policies about misleading ads. Also, although adverts don't include any wrong information, they can confuse people about whether they really need something or not. Overall, the more people exposed to ads, the more they tend to spend on shopping. I hope that you make a judicious choice whenever you need to purchase items and feel inevitably influenced by ads. There would be also surely helpful and advantageous aspects of the ads. So If you wisely distinguish essential things from unnecessary ones, you can manage your spending more effectively.

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~~ Teacher Sharon

The purpose of advertisements is to attract people to buy their products. 

>> The purpose of advertisements is to attract people to buy products. 

Companies seeking profit use stimulating advertising techniques. 

>> Correct

However, they sometimes deceive customers about a product's performance, which causes several social problems. 

>> Correct

According to one newspaper, younger people are especially susceptible to incorrect information in the ads. 

>> Correct

Recently, sellers have been using social media that is not regulated by law. 

>> Recently, sellers have been using social media to advertise which can be risky since it is not regulated by law. 

There are few policies about misleading ads. 

>> Correct

Also, although adverts don't include any wrong information, they can confuse people about whether they really need something or not. 

>> Correct

Overall, the more people exposed to ads, the more they tend to spend on shopping. 

>> Correct

I hope that you make a judicious choice whenever you need to purchase items and feel inevitably influenced by ads. 

>> Correct

There would be also surely helpful and advantageous aspects of the ads. 

>> Of course, there could also be helpful and advantageous aspects of ads. 

So If you wisely distinguish essential things from unnecessary ones, you can manage your spending more effectively.

>> So if you wisely distinguish essential things from unnecessary ones, you can manage your spending more effectively.