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attending an English kindergarten

양기연/2025-06-04

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I think there are advantages and disadvantages of attending an English academy at a very early age. Some linguists have argued that it is better to learn a language at an early age. I agree with them in that some babies can learn a new language automatically, without conscious learning like adults. However, I am concerned that learning English before they acquire their mother tongue makes the children so confused that they can get into a trouble in speaking both languages.

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Hello, Gi Yean!

I completely agree with you! Learning at a young age gives us the advantage of taking in as much information as possible, and retention is best. However, it can really lead to confusion and a mix of languages if not managed properly.

- T. Caitlyn

I think there are advantages and disadvantages of attending an English academy at a very early age.

>> I think there are advantages and disadvantages to attending an English academy at a very early age.

Some linguists have argued that it is better to learn a language at an early age.

>> CORRECT

I agree with them in that some babies can learn a new language automatically, without conscious learning like adults.

>> I agree with them that some babies can learn a new language automatically, without conscious learning, unlike adults.

However, I am concerned that learning English before they acquire their mother tongue makes the children so confused that they can get into a trouble in speaking both languages.

>> However, I am concerned that learning English before acquiring their mother tongue may confuse children, causing trouble in speaking both languages.