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What's your opinion on minors having jobs or earning money?

차진혁/2025-06-03

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I think the opinion on minors having jobs or earning money is not because kids is study and play. But gift of present is okay.
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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please take a look at the corrections below. Have a good night there! 


Cheers,
Jean~~




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I think the opinion on minors having jobs or earning money is not because kids is study and play. But gift of present is okay.
>>> I think minors having jobs or earning money is not just about kids needing to study and play. But receiving gifts is okay.
>>> OR: I think the debate on minors having jobs or earning money isn't just about kids needing to study and play. However, receiving gifts is acceptable.
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