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What can younger people learn from spending more time with older people?

임주미/2025-06-02

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I belive that younger people can learn various things from older people. The death of an old man is like the loss of a library. Most older people is wisdom and humility,of course not all older people.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Grace!

Wow! I was amazed by how you compared the death of an old man to the loss of a library! It’s a powerful way to show how much wisdom and humility are lost during this time. It also includes culture and tradition, which are disappearing because many younger generations don’t want to learn about them. It is indeed important to learn from older people so that these traditions and knowledge can live on.

-T. Caitlyn

I believe that younger people can learn various things from older people.

>> CORRECT
The death of an old man is like the loss of a library.

>> CORRECT
Most older people is wisdom and humility,of course not all older people.

>> Most older people possess wisdom and humility; of course, not all older people do.