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박종욱/2025-06-02

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1) goes 2) want 3)eurns 4) aspires 5) sings 6) goes 7) likes 8) cooks 9) run 10) wears Hi, Jeny Have a nice Monday good start for week i hope. I was playing soccer last night during 2hours. So, i have muscle pain and tired. When i twenties, lt is no problem because recovery fast when i sleep But, is not same to thirties. It's too late I am getting old too sad :( haha see you on Wednesday !
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Hello Jon!!
A student who tries their very best is the optimal type of student. I actively see this personality trait in you. This is precisely what I like to see in students, and I know you're committed to improvement and growth.
T. Jeny

1) goes 
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2) want 
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3)earns 
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4) aspires 
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5) sings
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6) goes 
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7) likes 
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8) cooks 
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9) run 
>>The rabbit runs fast.
10) wears
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Hi, Jeny
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Have a nice Monday good start for week i hope.
>>Have a nice Monday, I hope it will be a good start for the week.
I was playing soccer last night during 2hours.
>>I played soccer for 2hours last night.
So, i have muscle pain and tired.
>>So, I have muscle pains and I feel tired.
When i twenties, lt is no problem because recovery fast when i sleep
>>I didn't have a problem when I was in my twenties, because I could recover fast after sleeping.
But, is not same to thirties.
>>But it is not the same, now that I am in my thirties.
 It's too late
>>correct
I am getting old too sad :( haha
>>correct
see you on Wednesday!
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