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이유민/2025-06-01

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Yes, There are a lot of apartment in my area. I think our area is good for living with family. First, our university has a library , playground and walking trail. And there are elementary schools, middle schools even a high school. So a lot of students live near my house. Some of my friends live in apartment not studio apartment because she live in share house.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
I guess you found a good place to stay then. ^^
Living in a house that you share with others can be uncomfortable sometimes.
_T. SHAY

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Yes, There are a lot of apartment in my area.

>>Yes, there are a lot of apartments in my area.
OR: Yes. There are a lot of apartments in my area.

I think our area is good for living with family.

>>Correct
OR: I think our area is a good place to live in if you have a family.

First, our university has a library , playground and walking trail.

>>Correct
OR: One good point is, our university has a library, playground, and walking trail.
And there are elementary schools, middle schools even a high school.

>>Correct
OR: There are schools like elementary, middle, and high school too.
So a lot of students live near my house.

>>Correct
OR: Because of that, many students live near my house.
Some of my friends live in apartment not studio apartment because she live in share house.
>>Some of my friends live in an apartment which is not a studio apartment because she lives in a shared house.

OR: Some of my friends live in a house that they share with others.