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Why are older adults often assumed to be uninterested in technology or social media?

임주미/2025-05-31

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It is very challenging question. The world change so quickiy and it's not easy to follow. Now that I am getting older , I feel like all physical function are gone. And It takes a lot of time to get used to new things.
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Hi, Grace!
You are right! I actually feel the same way. Sometimes, I see young kids already using iPads or mobile phones, and sometimes they are better at navigating them than I am. Technology is really challenging, and learning something new is a struggle for older people, but still, we need to cope with it even if it takes a while.
- T. Caitlyn 
It is very challenging question.
>> It is a very challenging question.
The world change so quickiy and it's not easy to follow.
>> The world changes so quickly, and it's not easy to follow.
Now that I am getting older , I feel like all physical function are gone.
>> Now that I am getting older, I feel like all my physical functions are gone.
And It takes a lot of time to get used to new things.
>> CORRECT 
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