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Imagine that you are traveling to a foreign country and you need to buy a souvenir for yourself and

이지윤/2025-05-31

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think I will buy small and pretty souvenirs for myself. Because I like small and pretty things. It would be especially good if it was stationery or things that could decorate my diary. And then I will buy food for my friends. Because they like to eat and prefer items that can be consumed quickly rather than having them for a long time. My mother will buy practical items because she likes items that can be used in her life. My father will buy cigarettes because he is smoker. Also, my younger brother likes baseball, so I think he will buy something related to baseball.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Thank you, Yun, for sending your answer to me. 
I really appreciate you for sharing your thoughts about it. 
It's also nice to know how different each one of you is in your family when it comes to choosing souvenirs. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina


I think I will buy small and pretty souvenirs for myself.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I’ll probably treat myself to some dainty souvenirs.

Because I like small and pretty things.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I have a preference for small and lovely things.

It would be especially good if it was stationery or things that could decorate my diary.
>> It would be especially nice if it were stationery or items to decorate my diary.

And then I will buy food for my friends.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I’ll also get some food for my friends.

Because they like to eat and prefer items that can be consumed quickly rather than having them for a long time.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: They prefer food that can be eaten quickly rather than stored.

My mother will buy practical items because she likes items that can be used in her life. 
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: My mom prefers useful items she can use every day.

My father will buy cigarettes because he is smoker. 
>> My father will buy cigarettes because he is a smoker.

Also, my younger brother likes baseball, so I think he will buy something related to baseball.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: My younger brother loves baseball, so he’ll likely buy a baseball-related item.
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