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신봉규/2025-05-30

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I think the most famous festival is Waterbomb. It is a summer festival where people spray each other with water guns.

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Hello! I'm so glad you made the effort to finish the homework. You did an outstanding job expressing your thoughts—keep up the excellent work!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

I think the most famous festival is Waterbomb. It is a summer festival where people spray each other with water guns.

>> I think the most famous festival is Waterbomb. It's a summer festival where people spray each other with water guns.

OR >> I believe Waterbomb is the most well-known festival—it's a vibrant summer event where participants spray one another with water guns.