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My favorite athlete is Usain St. Leo Bolt.
유수빈/2025-05-30
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My favorite athlete is Usain St. Leo Bolt.
He is a Jamaican sprinter.
His running is as fast as lightning, so his nickname is 'Lightning Bolt'.
I recently learned about his great skills while taking track and field classes, so I had come to admire him.
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Hi Kara!^^
He is a Jamaican sprinter.
His running is as fast as lightning, so his nickname is 'Lightning Bolt'.
I recently learned about his great skills while taking track and field classes, so I had come to admire him.
I don't have any favorite athlete since I am not a fan of any sport.
We have an internationally known athlete, Manny Pacquiao.
Still, I am not into boxing, so I can't consider him my favorite.
Andrea
My favorite athlete is Usain St. Leo Bolt.
>> Correct
He is a Jamaican sprinter.
>> Correct
His running is as fast as lightning, so his nickname is 'Lightning Bolt'.
>> He runs as fast as lightning, so his moniker is "Lightning Bolt".
I recently learned about his great skills while taking track and field classes, so I had come to admire him.
>> I recently learned about his great skills while taking track and field classes, so I have come to admire him.
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