>> What are your thoughts on the drinking culture in Korean workplaces? As previous generation, they forced to enjoy alcohol in workplaces. But thesedays according to article, soju sales volume are decreasing from decade. And dining together frequency is also decreasing. I guess this phenomenom occurs the reason why young officers experience stiff office culture and drinking culture after time they grow up as dining together hater.

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                                          Are there any political hot potatoes in your country?

Our country's hot potatoes are about new elected president lee.

>>> Our country's hot potatoes are about the newly elected President Lee.

One of them I know about new president's office moved. 

>>> One thing I know is that the new president's office has moved.

Previous president yun used Yongsan office but new president lee wants to come back to The blue house because he think Yongsan office doesn't suitable for administraition of state affairs.

>>> The previous president, Yoon, used the Yongsan office, but the new president, Lee, wants to move back to the Blue House because he thinks the Yongsan office is not suitable for the administration of state affairs.