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(Homework) Do you like meeting new people?

김재영/2025-05-29

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Frankly to say, I don’t like meeting new people, because I don’t like feeling of awkwardnes when I meet new people. Actually I don’t know what I have to talk about. Second reason is that I have many relationship with many people already, and I don’t have enough time to meet them though.
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                                                      Do you like meeting new people?


Frankly to say, I don’t like meeting new people, because I don’t like feeling of awkwardnes when I meet new people.
>>> Frankly speaking, I don’t enjoy meeting new people because I dislike the awkwardness that comes with it.

 Actually I don’t know what I have to talk about. 
>>> Actually, I don’t know what I’m supposed to talk about at that moment. 

Second reason is that I have many relationship with many people already, and I don’t have enough time to meet them though.
>>> The second reason is that I already have many relationships with different people, and I don’t have enough time to meet them all.
>>> OR: Another reason is that I already have a wide circle of connections, and I struggle to make time to meet everyone. 
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