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What’s the biggest adventure you’ve had in your life?

조유리/2025-05-28

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My biggest adventure was visiting Warhol in Australia Living in a new place was not easy, but it was a fun experience.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Yu Li!

I envy you! I've heard of that place before and saw some pictures on the internet. It seems like a really lovely place. Anyway, thanks for the time and effort you took to write this. See you in our next class! ^^

~~Teacher Kate

My biggest adventure was visiting Warhol in Australia.

>>CORRECT!
Living in a new place was not easy, but it was a fun experience.

>>CORRECT!