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박종욱/2025-05-28

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1) c 2) b 3) c 4) b 5) a Jeny! do you like any activity? I do like activity. Have you been try to bungee jumping? If you have exprienced how was feel? I will jump this year maybe October? But i am nervous just thinking about it.
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Hello Jon!!!


Remember that learning English requires action. One small action is more powerful than reading hundreds of articles. Yes, we know it is very hard to do things, even if they are good for us. We humans are lazy creatures. That is why not many people speak English well.

You can do it in a fun and effective way.

Smile!!!

~~~T. Jeny~~~


1) c 
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2) b 
>>a)    Will
3) c 
>>a)    Had finished
4) b 
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5) a
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Jeny! do you like any activity?
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Yes, Jon, I sometimes do love doing sports activities.
I do like activity.
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 Have you been try to bungee jumping?
>>Have you tried bungee jumping?
It is scary to do bungee jumping so I haven't tried it yet. But I would love to try if given the chance.
If you have exprienced how was feel?
>>If you have experienced it how was feeling?
No, I haven't tried it yet.
I will jump this year maybe October.
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Wow! Good Luck!
But i am nervous just thinking about it.
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