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What does your ideal playground look like?

차유진/2025-05-27

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
My ideal playground is big slade, 2 swings, big jungle gym and spring riders I want big playground but I like my apartment playground because I played there since long time ago.
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Here's your corrected composition, Yale.  Please go over the revisions given below. See you tomorrow and have a good night's sleep!   


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My ideal playground is big slade, 2 swings, big jungle gym and spring riders I want big playground but I like my apartment playground because I played there since long time ago.
>>> My ideal playground has a big slide, two swings, a large jungle gym, and spring riders. I want a big playground, but I like my apartment's playground because I've been playing there for a long time.

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