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이유민/2025-05-23

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I really like shopping for groceries on offline malls. Whenever I do shopping for food, it’s fun for me. And I really love shopping (on? Or at?) a market when I travel abroad. I don’t often shopping for clothes but I bought a lot of clothes with my mother when seasons are changed. The best shopping for clothes is when I bought the dress for my brother’s wedding. That’s not my usual style of clothes but it’s really pretty and expensive. So I’m really satisfied with that shopping!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
Well, it was for a special occasion that's why it was memorable.
_T. SHAY^^
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I really like shopping for groceries on offline malls.

>>I really like shopping for groceries at offline malls.

Whenever I do shopping for food, it’s fun for me.

>>Correct
OR: I enjoy shopping for food.

And I really love shopping (on? Or at?) a market when I travel abroad.

>>And I really love shopping at a market when I travel abroad.

I don’t often shopping for clothes but I bought a lot of clothes with my mother when seasons are changed.

>>I don't often shop for clothes but I buy a lot of clothes with my mother when the seasons change.

The best shopping for clothes is when I bought the dress for my brother’s wedding.

>>The best shopping experience I had was when I bought a dress for my brother's wedding.

That’s not my usual style of clothes but it’s really pretty and expensive.

>>Correct
OR: That's not my usual style of clothing, but it's really pretty and expensive.

So I’m really satisfied with that shopping!

>>So I'm really satisfied with that purchase!