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이유민/2025-05-21

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No, I don’t want it because I think it is possible to be misinformed. Actually, I am curious about others’ thoughts but I don’t want to really know them. Even if it is a kind of complement, I’ll be really conscious of that. It’s like a Pandora’s box.. I think hearing her or his opinion about me directly is better than hearing it from my friends.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
You have a good point.
_T. SHAY^^
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No, I don’t want it because I think it is possible to be misinformed.

>>No, I don't because there's a possibility of misinformation or misunderstanding.
Actually, I am curious about others’ thoughts but I don’t want to really know them.

>>Correct
OR: Actually, I wonder about others' thoughts but at the same time, I don't want to know.
Even if it is a kind of complement, I’ll be really conscious of that.

>> Even if it is a kind of compliment, I'll be really conscious of that.
It’s like a Pandora’s box..

>>Correct
OR: It's similar to having a Pandora's box.
I think hearing her or his opinion about me directly is better than hearing it from my friends.

>>Correct
OR: I think hearing others' opinions of me from their own lips is better than hearing them from my friends.