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how do you choose where to go when you travel?

권경미/2025-05-21

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Choosing where to go when travelling often depends on a mix of influences. I love looking for the places which is unique experiences and hidden gems. Books or movies play a big role to choose where to go for me. I choose places based on history as well. Before I travel, I research the places I'm going to visit in advance- just like the saying goes You see as much as you know.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Ms. Judy! You sound like such a curious and intentional traveler. It sounds like your trips are full of amazing discoveries! I always research before going somewhere, too. It makes everything feel more exciting and familiar when you finally see it in person.
-T. Sonny
Choosing where to go when travelling often depends on a mix of influences.
>> Correct!
I love looking for the places which is unique experiences and hidden gems.
>>I love looking for places that offer unique experiences and hidden gems.
Books or movies play a big role to choose where to go for me.
>>Books and movies play a big role in helping me decide where to go.
I choose places based on history as well.
>>I also choose destinations based on their historical significance.
Before I travel, I research the places I'm going to visit in advance- just like the saying goes
You see as much as you know.
>>Before I travel, I always research the places I'm going to visit in advance—just like the saying goes, "You see as much as you know."
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